- 07:36 reading and critting, with coffee. and a rose. #
- 07:38 @ragnarwalton dude. thank you. you dind't have to; I was just joking about christmas, as I am wont to do. but greaty pleased. #
- 07:38 @ragnarwalton also, great way to keep me stuck in my room and away from your tv :) #
- 10:55 please retweet: Send a coathanger to pro-choice Dems who voted for #Stupak Amendment: www.sendacoathanger.com #
If anyone wants one please email me at zs.sophy@gmail.com with your snail mail address.
Cover Art by Edward R. Norden
Introduction by Z.S. Adani and Eric T. Reynolds
No Jubjub Birds Tonight by Sara Genge
The Embians by K.D. Wentworth
Ambassador by Thoraiya Dyer
Edge of the World by Jonathan Shipley
Games by Caren Gussoff
The Hangborn by Fredrick Obermeyer
One Awake in All the World by Robert T. Jeschonek
Alienation by Katherine Sparrow
Dark Rendezvous by Simon Petrie
Monuments of Flesh and Stone by Mike Resnick
Hope by Michael A. Burstein
Watching by Sandra McDonald
Encountering Evie by Sherry D. Ramsey
Memento Mori by Sue Blalock
The Gingerbread Man by James Gunn
The Angel of Mars by Michael Barretta
When You Visit the Magoebaskloof Hotel Be Certain Not to Miss the
Samango Monkeys by Elizabeth Bear
Rubber Monkeys by Kenneth Mark Hoover
Jade Flower by C.E. Grayson
The Light Stones by Erin E. Stocks
Mars Needs Baby Seals by
Coming from Hadley Rille Books in 2010ONE MORE LEFTALL GONE
One of the guidelines at Critters tells you that you might receive 20 crits, and that some will be ridiculously negative and some will be unbelieveably positive. Trust the MOR ones.
That advice has stood up well during convention critiques and online critiques and workshop critiques. But in person critting is a different cow altogether.
First, they have to be friends. Someone who doesn't like you or doesn't care to know you will damn you with faint critique: "You used a comma splice" is grammatically helpful but not a full reading. And sometims that's all the critter is capable of saying. (I recall rumors of a pro crit group that once was able to say only, "You've written a story! Congratulations!" as the full crit.)
Anyway, friends will try to say something cogent. And possibly intelligent :). And they won't fear being harsh (though negative is seldom useful) if they know the receiving end understands no harsh feelings. It's all in pursuit of story, right?
One of the best things about friends' crit comes in the form of trust. You trust the harsh crit and know it's accurate because you aren't so emotionally rattled that you just discount the crit entirely. And you also trust when the friends say, "This is good," that they aren't blowing smoke.
So yeah, right at the moment, I'm feeling chuffed. :)
For those who haven't read it already, or who prefer your fiction in audio form, Starship Sofa's Aural Delights #108 contains my flash story "Virtuoso", as well as poetry by Samantha Henderson and a short story by Michael Bishop.
The entire podcast is fun and upbeat, and I loved the narration for my story!
In other news there's lots of water on the moon. This links neatly back to my post about the future of space exploration... No longer any need to transport tons of water from earth!
Since I've applied myself to critiquing I've come to notice that in terms of on-line groups, the On-line Writers Group tends to have a much higher standard off submissions and critiques than Critters. I still appreciate the help I've had through critters, and I'll still use them, but I'm starting to feel more at home on the OWW. The good thing about Critters is the folks there who will give me detailed spelling and grammar corrections on my manuscript. At OWW, people will generally pick me up about plot points and/or other structural things which is very important too. I'm enjoying being promiscuous, in other words.
In other news, I've completed a hard slog of a rewrite on a short story, and have another one which I'll start on what most likely will be a hungover sunday. After that, I have several mild rewrites to complete and then I'll take a look in my notebook to see if any of the late night fragments I've written here and there need to be dug up and brushed off and sent out into the real world.
Still not happy with the Halloween flash piece.
Next year I want to consciously take a break from the kind of stories I've been writing and see if I can hit a sweet spot elsewhere. More exotic milieu's, more ambition in terms of world building. This year has been mostly about admiring M. John Harrison and Ramsay Campbell and being very English, and several stories feel like progressions on a broad theme that frankly I've pretty much plundered.
- 09:04 rt @gudmagazine psst. want some GUD? some _great_ GUD? Pay what you want! tr.im/gudpwyw // let's see what micropayments can do! #
- 12:44 off to work. did you know that pearl jam covered "Last Kiss"? ("where oh where could my baby be...") #
Tomorrow, Saturday, November 14th, 1:00pm, Nathaniel Williams
This anthology idea originally came from this quote by Jay Lake:
"Long after humanity and all its works have turned to dust, the bootprints left by the Apollo astronauts on the Moon will still be as fresh as the day they were left. What would visitors from the stars make of that? They should last longer than the fossils at the Olduvai Gorge."
Come by if you can and support Hadley Rille Books, the Kansas City area's Science Fiction, Fantasy, Historical, Archaeological book publisher.
OH, AND THERE IS WATER ON THE MOON!
www.sciencedaily.com/releases/2009/11/09
- Mood:hopeful
The low level of lithium in sun-like stars is a new marker astronomers can use in search of planetary systems. That's cool; we need all the tools we can get.
www.sciencedaily.com/releases/2009/11/09
- Mood:busy

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I'm impressed with the magazine - my story received three illustrations, and things happened fast over in Greece. From submission to acceptance, translation, illustration, publication, it took them a little less than four months. And I already got paid too.
The page where my story begins
One of the aliens
The other alien
And Saint Mark
- Mood:impressed
I will take a few days to feel very pleased with myself, dance a little jig and howl at the moon for a bit before the polishing and rewriting begins.
So, anyone want to beta-read an uncorrected first draft? I generally try to get all comments in before I begin the process of polishing the novel. Drop me a line here or at gbondoni (at) hotmail (dot) com.
- Mood:accomplished
- 09:20 at Starbucks, looking at a Tustin motorcycle cop with a knife in his calf-high leather boots. #
- 11:14 @TustinNews nope, Starbucks at 17th/Tustin. Good looking guy. #
And out we troop to see:
A single redcoat turns his head,
He turns and looks at me.
My man, from sky to sky's so far,
We never crossed before;
Such leagues apart the world's ends are,
We're like to meet no more;
What thoughts at heart have you and I
We cannot stop to tell;
But dead or living, drunk or dry,
Soldier, I wish you well.
-- A. E. Housman
Anyways, we're up, we're working, the load balancers are barely breaking a sweat right now and I need some food and a shot of whiskey. I don't even *like* whiskey!!
Thanks
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On Saturday the 14th at 4AM UTC/GMT we will be upgrading the operating system of our network load balancers to a newer version, one that will allow us to use both CPUs! Nifty, because multiprocessing is nice.
Since we have 2 load balancers, the plan is to upgrade 1 at a time, and there really should be very little impact to our website. Hopefully you won't notice a thing and I'll get to go back to the hotel and watch some wonderful late night infomercials.
We've got a lot of exciting projects coming up for 2010 and we're hoping that we'll be able to deliver them all to you, that you will find it useful/cool/lovely and then you will use the site even more. Behind-the-scenes work like this will give us the capacity to handle the anticipated traffic, so expect a few more maintenance windows especially in the beginning of next year as we've got some neat ideas to improve performance around here! We had the recent 30-45 minute outage yesterday due to one of our logging databases filling up disk space -- not so great design coupled with my human error in handling the initial problem -- and it looks like we're going to finally have some resources to eliminate stuff like that. I can't wait!
As usual, I will be updating status.livejournal.org before and after, just in case you are not able to reach our main website during the work.
In July I wrote the editorial for Abyss&Apex: 40 Years, about the initial man on the moon landing.
For August I had first an appearance in Defenestration: Hellbend For Leather, a light-hearted romp through Hell.
The end of September had my editorial at 10Flash, Size Matters, about the special challenges of writing flash fiction. KC Ball, brilliant editor and writer, invited me to give my thoughts. Bless her.
And then October opened with my story at 10Flash, Slim and Benny-Be-Damned Take It On The Lam, a zombie apocalypse story.
October 25 saw my slipstream romance at Quantum Kiss: Orthogonal To The Astral Plane, (not a story about new age math, as one editor once feared!) where it has garnered 7 comments, the last a bit of poetry that I hadn't seen before that fits the theme of the story.
Nothing seems tap for November, darn it, but there's all of 2010 with promises of big news and who knows what else in terms of story sales.
So hey,
(btw, any all y'all want to go put comments out there on my work, please do. I like hearing from ya.)
On the writing side, I got 2400 words done last night. This got me to the end of chapter 24 of Siege and a third of the way through chapter 25. The novel should be done in 6K words or less! So close!
- 01:57 this dream brought to you by the letter "b" - beetle, bitten, butt, bed. #
- 08:59 editor squee: we got a submission from... no, can't tell you, but hahahaha! squee! #
- 09:46 tazo gibberish fortune of the day: "you will soon find great love, money, joy, beauty, yadda yadda yadda" #
- 10:37 line in gmail advertising a novel: "speculative fiction can be optomistic." well. glad they think so! #
- 10:38 my spelling error, not theirs; one of my stumble-words, optimism. #
- 11:26 stupid journeys into the subconscious; it's gonna be about abuse :( #
- 12:35 did I talk to someone at WFC about a bird anthology? #
- 12:38 rt @BoingBoing Buzz Aldrin: Honorary Consul General to the Moon bit.ly/3RNWdO #
- 12:46 what Clockwork Orange (the movie) has done to me: I'm seriously creeped out by the song "Singin' In The Rain" #
- 12:54 @gymhaag nope, I'm down with the Ludwig van :) #
- 13:32 why did tmobile .com just send me a message telling me my password? #
- 13:52 antibubbles. #
- 14:48 there's a woman here working very hard to share her joy of mastication with us in this Starbucks. oooh, and a loud slurp of water! #
- 15:55 www.organictransformations.com/gourds/ca
nteengourdpurses.html oh my golly wow. christmas gift will soon be here! # - 15:56 two people just walked into Starbucks with these lovely gourd purses... not a lot of space inside but loads of style. #
- 16:44 3k words on a new, extremely autobiographical short story. Need to cut 1k words for the market or maybe try again and slap a lid on my id. #
- 16:46 @jay_lake you talkin' trash about me, lake? #
- 16:56 still high from completing a story. is there a study of letdown endorphins in writers? #
Copyright © 2009 Richard H. Fay
Holiday on Phreetum Prime
by Richard H. Fay
Twin red suns rise over a crimson sea
As wudols twitter a raucous chorus
Amongst the majestic etafal trees.
Saunter beneath the weeping purple fronds
And sip a cup of sytunn flower tea
While wine-stained waters kiss a chartreuse shore.
Sail the ruby waves on a solar sloop.
Watch black-winged tijucks fish for mugaspits.
Feel the droning hum of an ulorn's song
As it dives right under your silver ship.
Weigh anchor beside Glastornak Island
And marvel at its tall crystalline spires.
Return to your quaint cliff side veranda
In time to see the blue shubiyemps dance.
Laugh at their crazy mating rituals,
But then shed a tear when the males drop dead.
Join the joyous feast and masquerade
To honour the fatal change of seasons.
Rest quietly beneath the yellow gaze
Of Phreetum Prime's seething volcanic moon.
Spy golden sprites flaring in the night sky
As ion storms clash in the stratosphere.
Be lulled to sleep by a burgana's trill
As a soft breeze blows across the dark sea.
Illustration available on merchandise in the Abandoned Towers Zazzle Store
- Mood:artistic
